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Friday, 20 December 2019

summer learning journey

Family friends and animals are things that are very important to me .

Family is important to me because they always can trust me and I can trust them .


Friends are important because I always have someone to share myShare my fun with .



Animals are important to me because they are good company  .

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Scott,

    All of the things you mentioned are very important things. Family is so vital in making you yourself and I like that you have a lot of trust within your family. It is very important!

    Friends are also real treasures. They help you have fun, build social skills, and learn. What are some fun things you do with your friends? Maybe you could tell me some of your favourite memories with them.

    What are your favourite type of animals? Mine are elephants! They’re so cute and even the small ones are massive. I like how they use their trunks and how smart they are. There’s even an elephant who is a famous painter!

    I would really appreciate it if you changed your titles so they were a bit different. Titles are a great way to draw in readers, so be as imaginative as you’d like. Perhaps, for example, you could call this one “My Treasures”.

    Ngā mihi maioha,
    Shannon (SLJ)

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